This text beautifully captures the longing for a peaceful escape, free from the constraints of the world. The imagery of nature and love is so vivid, it feels like you’re already there.
Your poem is so restful, in the sense that the hope for a perfect moment (not a perfectionist one) keeps returning in another form, in another line, and it makes you feel that, in the end, it will become reality. I really loved it.
Actually, the first version expresses more emphasizes ... probably I am being bias, but the song is more toward the woman, because she is usually the one insisting of a getaway rather than the man, who at times can be reluctant of escape.
Also, with her singing as the main lead has more power to the song.
Nice
Thank you.
This text beautifully captures the longing for a peaceful escape, free from the constraints of the world. The imagery of nature and love is so vivid, it feels like you’re already there.
Thank you again, Asliya, for your feedback.
Your poem is so restful, in the sense that the hope for a perfect moment (not a perfectionist one) keeps returning in another form, in another line, and it makes you feel that, in the end, it will become reality. I really loved it.
Thank you so much for your deep reading and feedback.
Don’t we all want to go there. I know I do. Beautiful music and beautiful words 💖
Of course, Jessie, everyone wants to go, but where to go is the real problem.💙💚💛😅
I love the first one
Thank you, I appreciate it.
Actually, the first version expresses more emphasizes ... probably I am being bias, but the song is more toward the woman, because she is usually the one insisting of a getaway rather than the man, who at times can be reluctant of escape.
Also, with her singing as the main lead has more power to the song.
Deep peace meditation
Thank you so much for giving it the name of a peaceful meditation.
Thank you so much for sharing such wonderful remarks.